snoow

i can't lie, i had the cheekiest of quick looks at your lair page last night before going tp bed and i am so excited to do this one (as i am all reviews, of course). i didn't go further than your profile, had to leave something for my 'present-tense writing reviews :')

ok one, the first thing we see is the lil art piece and you could not have picked a better one. it makes your lair look super friendly and you as a person approachable. reading the lore extract was beautiful; i've never been so intrigued reading a 'lengthier' one (it's not even that lengthy, i've just read a loooot of short ones). it could be longer, and it doesn't need to be - you got to the point and it was such a nice read. i'm excited to go on and see the dragons!

i notice your lair has quite a few tabs, which is exciting. i'll probably pick one dragon from the first few tabs :)

Alioth

maybe i'm biased, but this coatl is one of the most beautiful i've ever seen. of course i had to see what he looked like without the apparel, and i do not regret it. he literally has all my favourite genes on a dragon. i took a hiatus and came back to starmap, and you can bet i snagged a few dragons up with that gene. anyway, he is so beautiful with a good colour and gene combination. as if i wasn't in awe enough without the apparel, with the apparel he is even better. you have chosen the perfect skin for him; not too visible, it is quite delicate, but visible enough to see it and add a bit of oomph to the cutie. honestly the ring is my favourite apparel because it made me laugh, it's so small but it adds the greatest touch. i saw the click for lore thing first so i clicked it, and wow do you put some effort in. i never knew the meaning of alioth and i'm glad i do now, suits his colours wonderfully! reading his story felt like the most poetic thing i've read all day (saying that, i have just woken up). i like the fact you put those lyrics in alioth's profile, it does seem to suit his confusion of identity really nicely. his story does suit the lore nicely, a story to remember, just like the Pantheon's are meant to.

Sameul

my god, that is one of the most beautiful imp dragons i have ever seen. in fact, probably the most beautiful. i'm excited to explore her further. i am not that big of a fan on the falcon gene, but i don't mind on this pretty gal. the skin added to her adds a definite simplicity beauty; i never would have thought the red skin would've fitted a dragon so nicely. i honestly love all the apparel you have added to her, i often find red dragons are hard/difficult to dress up but you have managed it so wonderfully. i'm actually really sad to see a lore has not been written up yet, and i'm going to subscribe to your lore page so i can keep up to date with it as it's fascinating. ancient fungus would totally suit this dragon as a familiar just because of the colours hehe. i'm sorry i chose a dragon without a lore profile! i didn't realise i get too excited and just write straight away and scroll down as i go along. but be proud of her, she is a real beauty.

Able

it made me so happy you had a skinny noodle :'). super underappreciated (and yes i will write this under every spiral review i do). of course my first go to is to see him without the apparel and he is gorgeous! the seafoam adds a nice contrast with the opal not making it too 'out there' and obvious. i also think you have chosen the perfect apparel for him. naturally i am a sucker for the flowerfall apparel, but i adore it's colour contrast with able, not a 'contrast' contrast but y'know, obvious enough that it is there. he's missing a familiar which made me so sad :(( the song hallelujah always gives me some form of chills everytime. i've never really listened to pentatonix but they covered the song so beautifull and i do believe it suits able well. i'm excited to see what his lore story will be!

Lazarus

ok one, apologies for flipping it. it looks so uncomfortable but, y''know, the aesthetic of the dragon facing the right way. it's kind of needed. anyway, skydancers are so pretty which includes this beautiful one. a level 25, fair play. i remember when i trained two of my dragons to level 25, never again. the genes on her are not my favourite but she does pull them off so so nicely. the apparel makes her, again, look that much nicer. the 'peace dove' adds such a nice, gentle touch to her and contrasts nicely next to the banner. going onwards, i'm so excited to see that she has a bio!! reading it has honestly made me feel so sorrowful for her oh my gosh. i can see why the dove is very fitting now and the reason for the banner which has honestly melted my heart. i have never seen a little 'diary' for a dragon that they have done before, and it is so cute to see. it definitely makes her more unique and an enjoyable read.

overall, i LOVED this review. you have a super interesting lore with some great dragons. i think, in terms of looks, sameul is my favourite, but in terms of lore/story, lazarus has my heart. i have subbed to your lore post because i am looking forward to following your lore! it is gorgeous and you should be super proud of what you have got :').